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Kanuma Park in Fuchinobe

The place that I want to recommend to everybody is “Kanuma Park”. The park is near my house and I have been there often since I was young. The first reason why I recommend this place to you is that you can see a lot of animals such as swans, turtles, ducks, carps, pigeons and the like. The second reason is its natural richness. The park has a lot of plants with colorful flowers and green grasses. Surrounded by nature, I am sure you will relax in the park. Thirdly, the atmosphere is different in the day and in the evening. During daytime there are many children playing cheerfully riding on types of toy cars. In the evening, it becomes dark and quiet, and you can really settle down. Whether you want to relax or have fun, I would recommend this lovely park.

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